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Okay this is like the small intro into my new story, Lost at Sea. The main six become merpoinies after a magic mishap. Rainbow Dash suddenly is a scaredy pony, because she doesn't like magic being used on her. Now everypony has to deal with eachothers bad attitudes, before returning home. The main six have adventures in the sea, where every animal is not as friendly as they are at home. Hopefully they can all find eachother and hopefully come back to Equestria.
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Lost at Sea/ Chapter 1: Magic Mishap


"Twilight, are you ready?" her five best friends asked afraid to hear her answer.
"Psh! Of course I am, I tested it on non-living things!" She said, smiling arrogantly
"Are you sure it works on LIVING things?" Rainbow asked holding on tight to her coltfriends light blue hoof.
"Rainbow! Ah thought you weren't afraid of anythin'!" Apple Jack laughed
"Oh come on AJ! Think about it! We could be dead!" She said, a terrified look on her face.
"Dont worry guys! My sister is just scared because she doesn't trust magic, being used on her." Scootaloo explained
"Scoots, don't make me regret adopting you." Rainbow growled
Scootaloo pulled her hoof across her lips to motion that she was zipping it closed.
Twilight cracked a smile when her horn glowed magenta, and she cast a spell on Scootaloo making a real zipper appear before her mouth. Scootaloo unzipped it so she could giggle, but then Rainbow gave her an evil stare so she zipped it back up.
"A-Are you sure t-this is s-s-safe?" Fluttershy stuttered
"About ninety percent." Twilight replied, her lavender muzzle shoved into a yellow book.
When she said that, Rainbow Dash looked like she was soffocating her colt friend, and Fluttershy's colt friend was holding onto her, making himself vibrate with her shakes.
Rainbow lossened her grip to mention something to Twilight.
"Twilight, if anything bad happens, you are going to be dead." She muttered
"What could go wrong?" Twilight asked
"Many things Twilight. Magic can do almost anything!" Fluttershy exclaimed from across the room.
"What if I lose my flying abilities. MY WINGS!" Rainbow gasped, holding her wings close to her body as if she were hugging them.
"Everything is going to be alright Dash!" Her colt friend said, as he wrapped his wings around her.
She slapped his wing off her, giving him a scowl.
"OW! What was that for!" He yelped in pain.
"It's not that time, this is serious. If we don't get transported to a world of eternal harmony, I'm going to murder Twilight. But I wouldn't have met her in a world like that. So I would have to go to Canterlot." Rainbow said scratching her chin, thinking of her murder plans.
"Okay ready everypony?" Twilight asked, shutting the yellow book and tossing it to the side.
Everypony nodded in agreement, although Rainbow was scared.
"Okay, here goes nothing!" Twilight yelled
Twilight's horn began to glow magenta, and wind swirled around the room, spinning all of them in a small tornado.
Pinkie Pie was giggling, while Rainbow flew in circles, as if it were the last time she'd use her wings.
Suddenly everypony began to glow their own specail color, except Rainbow who glew the full spectrum. Rainbow and the others suddenly couldn't breathe. Rainbow tried to call for help, but failed because it was like air was sucked out of her.
Soon she could breathe again, but couldn't find the others. She looked to make sure her wings were there, and they were. She let out a sigh of relief until she noticed she only had two hooves. She had a tail where he hind legs were supposed to be. She swished her rainbow fish tail, and noticed she was in water. She turned into a merpony!
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"Oh my.." Fluttershy gasped as she looked into the darkness of the sea.
Little fish swarmed around her, which she enjoyed. But now that there were no merponies around, she didn't know how to care for herself. She looked around and screamed really loud noticing her voice sounded normal, and not bubbly.
"BIG MAC?" She yelled for her coltfriend
"ANYPONY?" she yelled, letting out a sigh of dispair.
She swam around, finding no sign of something yummy to eat. How was she going to find somepony to help her. They could be all over the world for all they knew!
"I'm so angry, I could just scream." Fluttershy told herself.
"Ahhh." She yelled sofly
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"Any poneh here?" Apple Jack yelled, swimming around looking for another pony.
"Rainbow Dash was right, we shouldn't have done this. I wonder if she is freaking out right now." Apple Jack mumbled under her breath
Apple Jack saw a black merpony in the distance. It was swarming frantically, and giggling. It had to be Rainbow Dash or Pinkie Pie. She assumed Pinkie Pie, because Rainbow would be scared, and Pinkie would just be laughing and having a ball.
"Pinkie Pie?" Apple Jack yelled swimming to her.
"Apple Jack?" the voice yelled back
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Twilight swam closer to the merpony.
"Twilight?" Apple Jack asked, noticing it wasn't Rainbow or Pinkie.
"Isn't this fun!" Twilight exclaimed
"I cant wait to write to the princess!" Twilight continued.
"Twilight! Now we cant get back!" Apple Jack yelled
"I don't think magic works down here."
"We're doomed!" A voice yelled in the distance.
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Okay, tell me what you think! I'm more of a fan of hetero (malexfemale) pairings, so bare with me. I hope you enjoy this small fanfic, and if you enjoy I may write more ;)
--MoonDash
:iconmoondash:
The main six, lost at sea? :o
If some people like this i may continue :3
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:iconcupcakedog:
you should it is great
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~Lucymaddy Sep 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is creative!!! Keep going~!!!
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:iconmoondash:
I might. I wasn't quite sure about this though
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~Lucymaddy Sep 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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